Day 2
Today when I got to school I saw the Elf! It is wearing a poi hat! But I said to the Elf "that's not how we put our poi's silly! We put it around our waist and tuck it in not on our heads! When I left the Elf alone I saw some bad boy's touch him! I said to myself "Oh no! What if the Elf lost its powers! How is he going to get back to santa!" I panicked but still hope he was okay... I wonder what he's going to do tomorrow is he still going to have his powers??
Hi, It's me Kyana. I like how you added lots of detail to your writing. Maybe next time you could make your writing a bit bigger. Is he always this mischief? Good job!
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